Naminé
Number of posts : 1 Registration date : 2009-01-23
| Subject: Thage (not done) Mon Feb 02, 2009 8:49 pm | |
| Name: Thage Age: 18 Race: human Weapon Type: book Personality: despiteful, confident in herself, somewhat kind, but mysterious Element of Preference: fire Secondary Element: dark Likes: her pet wolf Hates: humans History: (tomorrow) Appearance/Pictures:
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Jonathan Seraph DeLauren Admin
Number of posts : 27 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-07-13
Status Report Hit Points (HP): (25000/25000) Skill Points (SP): (10000/10000) Race: Electromorph (Electricity)
| Subject: Re: Thage (not done) Tue Feb 03, 2009 10:39 am | |
| Your history is one massive run-on sentence. Plus, why make your character what she hates? Add some more to history, and try to add some detail too. | |
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Soul
Number of posts : 19 Age : 28 Registration date : 2008-12-11
Status Report Hit Points (HP): (20000/20000) Skill Points (SP): (7500/7500) Race: Vampyr
| Subject: Re: Thage (not done) Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:06 am | |
| why be so mean John? why not support her ideas and help her achieve something greater out of it?
p.s. you cheater *lowers your hp and sp to 1* ;D | |
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